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Prompt 8: The Unwanted Visitor
kknox0009 wrote in jctc_summer2014
It was a cold and stormy night. Emma was reading a book on the couch when the doorbell rang. She wondered who it could be. She had not been expecting any visitors and it was later in the evening. As she peered out the window she saw a man dressed in black. She figured that it was a man selling something by the attire he was wearing. She answered the door with intentions of saying that she wasn’t interested.

When she opened the door, she saw a tall handsome man with dark hair and dark eyes. She immediately felt attached to this person and she had never even met him. He introduced himself as Lu and stated that he was in the home security business. He began to point to certain areas of the house that seemed to be unprotected. Emma decided after a few minutes that he seemed like a great guy and invited him in to show her more areas of the home that needed to be secured.

While walking into the kitchen Emma began to feel quite sick. She began to sweat and feel as if she was on fire. She turned around and watched as Lu smiled in an evil manner. Lu pulled the hood up on the black jacket he was wearing and approached Emma slowly. He then leaned over and whispered in her ear, “ I am here to steal your soul, for I am Satan”.

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It's an interesting start - there's not a lot of development happening but it could turn into an interesting exploration of evil.

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